Changed the English description of Wahha-man: interpolated between what was there...

[hengbandforosx/hengbandosx.git] / src / realm-song.c

diff --git a/src/realm-song.c b/src/realm-song.c
index 82a990a..a572076 100644 (file)
--- a/src/realm-song.c
+++ b/src/realm-song.c
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ concptr do_music_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
        case 1:
                if (name) return _("祝福の歌", "Song of Blessing");
-               if (desc) return _("命中率とACのボーナスを得る。", "Gives bonus to hit and AC for a few turns.");
+               if (desc) return _("命中率とACのボーナスを得る。", "Gives a bonus to hit and AC for a few turns.");
 
                /* Stop singing before start another */
                if (cast || fail) stop_singing(p_ptr);
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ concptr do_music_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
        case 7:
                if (name) return _("戦いの歌", "Heroic Ballad");
-               if (desc) return _("ヒーロー気分になる。", "Removes fear, and gives bonus to hit and 10 more HP for a while.");
+               if (desc) return _("ヒーロー気分になる。", "Removes fear. Gives a bonus to hit for a while. Heals you for 10 HP.");
 
                /* Stop singing before start another */
                if (cast || fail) stop_singing(p_ptr);
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ concptr do_music_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
        case 8:
                if (name) return _("霊的知覚", "Clairaudience");
                if (desc) return _("近くの罠/扉/階段を感知する。レベル15で全てのモンスター、20で財宝とアイテムを感知できるようになる。レベル25で周辺の地形を感知し、40でその階全体を永久に照らし、ダンジョン内のすべてのアイテムを感知する。この効果は歌い続けることで順に起こる。",
-                       "Detects traps, doors and stairs in your vicinity. And detects all monsters at level 15, treasures and items at level 20. Maps nearby area at level 25. Lights and know the whole level at level 40. These effects occurs by turns while this song continues.");
+                       "Detects traps, doors and stairs in your vicinity. And detects all monsters at level 15, treasures and items at level 20. Maps nearby area at level 25. Lights and know the whole level at level 40. These effects accumulate as the song continues.");
 
                /* Stop singing before start another */
                if (cast || fail) stop_singing(p_ptr);
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ concptr do_music_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
        case 14:
                if (name) return _("フィリエルの歌", "Firiel's Song");
-               if (desc) return _("周囲の死体や骨を生き返す。", "Resurrects nearby corpse and skeletons. And makes these your pets.");
+               if (desc) return _("周囲の死体や骨を生き返す。", "Resurrects nearby corpse and skeletons. And makes them your pets.");
 
                {
                        /* Stop singing before start another */
@@ -757,7 +757,7 @@ concptr do_music_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
        case 26:
                if (name) return _("守りの歌", "Endurance");
                if (desc) return _("自分のいる床の上に、モンスターが通り抜けたり召喚されたりすることができなくなるルーンを描く。",
-                       "Sets a glyph on the floor beneath you. Monsters cannot attack you if you are on a glyph, but can try to break glyph.");
+                       "Sets a glyph on the floor beneath you. If you are on a glyph, monsters cannot attack you but can try to break the glyph.");
 
                {
                        /* Stop singing before start another */
@@ -821,7 +821,7 @@ concptr do_music_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
        case 28:
                if (name) return _("ヤヴァンナの助け", "Relief of Yavanna");
-               if (desc) return _("強力な回復の歌で、負傷と朦朧状態も全快する。", "Powerful healing song. Also heals cut and stun completely.");
+               if (desc) return _("強力な回復の歌で、負傷と朦朧状態も全快する。", "Powerful healing song. Also completely heals cuts and being stunned.");
 
                /* Stop singing before start another */
                if (cast || fail) stop_singing(p_ptr);
@@ -892,7 +892,7 @@ concptr do_music_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
        case 31:
                if (name) return _("フィンゴルフィンの挑戦", "Fingolfin's Challenge");
                if (desc) return _("ダメージを受けなくなるバリアを張る。",
-                       "Generates a barrier which completely protect you from almost all damage.");
+                       "Generates a barrier which completely protects you from almost all damage.");
 
                /* Stop singing before start another */
                if (cast || fail) stop_singing(p_ptr);