To be more idiomatic, reworded the English description of the duration of the time...

diff --git a/src/mind.c b/src/mind.c
index f4d9dc5..ffbbc05 100644 (file)
--- a/src/mind.c
+++ b/src/mind.c
@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ static concptr const mind_tips[5][MAX_MIND_POWERS] =
        "Pulls a distant item close to you.",
        "Fires a ball which damages. When not resisted, you gain SP. You will be occupied for 0 to 1.5 turns after casting as your mind recovers.",
        "Fires a beam of pure energy which penetrates the invulnerability barrier.",
-       "Stops time. Consumes all of your SP. The more consumes SP, the longer duration of spell.",
+       "Stops time. Consumes all of your SP. The more SP consumed, the longer the duration of spell.",
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