2005-02-22 Perry

 Proofing (grammatical fixes)
 Manual: Locales.xml

diff --git a/Docs/Users/Manual/Locales.xml b/Docs/Users/Manual/Locales.xml
index dce30cd..e4c6a1c 100644 (file)
--- a/Docs/Users/Manual/Locales.xml
+++ b/Docs/Users/Manual/Locales.xml
@@ -124,14 +124,14 @@
   <sect2>
     <title>Installing translation</title>
 
-    <para>Easiest way to install translations is selecting them in installer.
-    Translations are selected in 4th installer dialog (<guilabel>Select
-    components</guilabel>). Default install (<guilabel>Typical
+    <para>The easiest way to install translations is to select them in the installer.
+    Translations are selected in the 4th installer dialog (<guilabel>Select
+    components</guilabel>). The default install (<guilabel>Typical
     Installation</guilabel>) does not install translations, but they can be
     individually selected from the list.</para>
 
     <para>If you don't want to re-run installer, or didn't install WinMerge
-    with installer at first place, then WinMerge translation files are
+    with the installer in the first place, then WinMerge translation files are
     available in zipped versions and translation updates. To install new
     translation file:</para>
 
@@ -145,18 +145,18 @@
         </listitem>
 
         <listitem>
-          <para>If <filename class="directory">Languages</filename>
-          subdirectory does not exist under WinMerge directory (where
+          <para>If the <filename class="directory">Languages</filename>
+          subdirectory does not exist under the WinMerge directory (where
           <filename>WinMerge.exe</filename> and/or
           <filename>WinMergeU.exe</filename> is located) create it.</para>
         </listitem>
 
         <listitem>
-          <para>a) If you downloaded just language file, unzip it into the
+          <para>a) If you downloaded just the language files, unzip them into the
           <filename class="directory">Languages</filename> directory.</para>
 
-          <para>b) If you downloaded WinMerge release then search for
-          <filename>Merge*.lang</filename> files, where * is name of language
+          <para>b) If you downloaded an entire WinMerge release, then search for
+          <filename>Merge*.lang</filename> files, where * is a language name
           (<filename>MergeSwedish.lang</filename> for Swedish translation).
           Unzip that file to the <filename>Languages</filename>
           directory.</para>
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@
 
     <para>Please submit errors you find in translations as bugs to our <ulink
     url="http://sourceforge.net/tracker/?group_id=13216&amp;atid=113216">bug-list</ulink>.
-    It would be great if you can provide corrected version of translated text
+    It would be great if you can provide a corrected version of the translated text
     also.</para>
   </sect2>
 

diff --git a/Docs/Users/Manual/readme.txt b/Docs/Users/Manual/readme.txt
index 55a5cd9..4d74b4a 100644 (file)
--- a/Docs/Users/Manual/readme.txt
+++ b/Docs/Users/Manual/readme.txt
@@ -1,4 +1,8 @@
 2005-02-22 Perry
+ Proofing (grammatical fixes)
+ Manual: Locales.xml
+
+2005-02-22 Perry
  Rewrite translation coverage paragram
  Manual: Locales.xml