Make a first pass at editing the English descriptions for the elementalist systems...

diff --git a/src/mind/mind-elementalist.cpp b/src/mind/mind-elementalist.cpp
index 56f173d..bb4c78c 100644 (file)
--- a/src/mind/mind-elementalist.cpp
+++ b/src/mind/mind-elementalist.cpp
@@ -250,25 +250,25 @@ static element_text_list element_texts = {
         "Great energy of Fire system will be able to burn out all of your enemies.")},
     { ElementRealm::ICE,
     _("氷系統の魔法はその冷たさで敵の動きを奪い尽くし、魂すらも止めてしまうでしょう。",
-        "Ice system will be freeze your enemies even their souls.")},
+        "Ice system will freeze your enemies, even their souls.")},
     { ElementRealm::SKY,
     _("空系統は大いなる天空のエネルギーを駆使して敵の全てを撃滅できます。",
-        "Sky system can terminate all of your enemies powerfully with enery of the great sky.")},
+        "Sky system can terminate all of your enemies powerfully with the energy of the great sky.")},
     { ElementRealm::SEA,
     _("海系統はその敵の全てを溶かし、大いなる海へと返してしまいます。",
-        "Sea system melts all of your enemies and returns them to the great oscean.")},
+        "Sea system melts all of your enemies and returns them to the great ocean.")},
     { ElementRealm::DARKNESS,
     _("闇系統は恐るべき力を常闇から引き出し、敵を地獄へと叩き落とすでしょう。",
-        "Dark system buries all of your enemies by scary power from dark hell.")},
+        "Dark system draws terrifying power from the darkness and knocks your enemies into hell.")},
     { ElementRealm::CHAOS,
     _("混沌系統は敵の意識も条理も捻じ曲げ、その存在をあの世に送ってしまいます。",
-        "Chaos system twists and wraps your enemies even their souls and kill all of them resultly.")},
+        "Chaos system twists and wraps your enemies, even their souls, and scatters them as dust in the wind.")},
     { ElementRealm::EARTH,
     _("地系統は偉大なる大地の力を呼び出して、数多の敵のことごとくを粉砕しようとします。",
-        "Earth system smashs all of your enemies massively using its huge powers.")},
+        "Earth system smashes all of your enemies massively using its huge powers.")},
     { ElementRealm::DEATH,
     _("瘴気系統は全ての生ける者にとって途轍もない毒です。",
-        "Death system is doomed poison for all of living your ememies.")},
+        "Death system is a tremendous poison for all living enemies.")},
 };
 
 // clang-format on