[Fix] #39587 misc-english-usage-part3.txt に従い mind.c / player-effects.c の英文校正 / Proof...

diff --git a/src/mind.c b/src/mind.c
index f8e1f1c..40fa16a 100644 (file)
--- a/src/mind.c
+++ b/src/mind.c
@@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ static concptr const mind_tips[5][MAX_MIND_POWERS] =
        "Gives aura which damages all monsters which attacked you for a while.",
        "Damages an adjacent monster, and blow it away.",
        "Fires a large energy ball.",
-       "Dispels all magics which is effecting a monster.",
+       "Dispels all magics which is affecting a monster.",
        "Summons ghosts.",
        "Generates a huge ball of frame which centered on you.",
        "Fires a long, powerful energy beam.",

diff --git a/src/player-effects.c b/src/player-effects.c
index c848b23..3fead57 100644 (file)
--- a/src/player-effects.c
+++ b/src/player-effects.c
@@ -3397,26 +3397,25 @@ bool hp_player(player_type *creature_ptr, int num)
  */
 static concptr desc_stat_pos[] =
 {
-       _("強く", "strong"),
-       _("知的に", "smart"),
-       _("賢く", "wise"),
-       _("器用に", "dextrous"),
-       _("健康に", "healthy"),
-       _("美しく", "cute")
+       _("強く", "stronger"),
+       _("知的に", "smarter"),
+       _("賢く", "wiser"),
+       _("器用に", "more dextrous"),
+       _("健康に", "healthier"),
+       _("美しく", "cuter")
 };
 
-
 /*
  * Array of stat "descriptions"
  */
 static concptr desc_stat_neg[] =
 {
-       _("弱く", "weak"),
-       _("無知に", "stupid"),
-       _("愚かに", "naive"),
-       _("不器用に", "clumsy"),
-       _("不健康に", "sickly"),
-       _("醜く", "ugly")
+       _("弱く", "weaker"),
+       _("無知に", "stupider"),
+       _("愚かに", "more naive"),
+       _("不器用に", "clumsier"),
+       _("不健康に", "more sickly"),
+       _("醜く", "uglier")
 };
 
 
@@ -3451,7 +3450,7 @@ bool do_dec_stat(player_type *creature_ptr, int stat)
        /* Attempt to reduce the stat */
        if (dec_stat(creature_ptr, stat, 10, (ironman_nightmare && !randint0(13))))
        {
-               msg_format(_("ひどく%sなった気がする。", "You feel very %s."), desc_stat_neg[stat]);
+               msg_format(_("ひどく%sなった気がする。", "You feel %s."), desc_stat_neg[stat]);
 
                /* Notice effect */
                return TRUE;
@@ -3470,7 +3469,7 @@ bool do_res_stat(player_type *creature_ptr, int stat)
        /* Attempt to increase */
        if (res_stat(creature_ptr, stat))
        {
-               msg_format(_("元通りに%sなった気がする。", "You feel more %s."), desc_stat_pos[stat]);
+               msg_format(_("元通りに%sなった気がする。", "You feel %s."), desc_stat_pos[stat]);
                return TRUE;
        }
 
@@ -3505,7 +3504,7 @@ bool do_inc_stat(player_type *creature_ptr, int stat)
                else if (stat == A_CON)
                        chg_virtue(creature_ptr, V_VITALITY, 1);
 
-               msg_format(_("ワーオ！とても%sなった！", "Wow!  You feel very %s!"), desc_stat_pos[stat]);
+               msg_format(_("ワーオ！とても%sなった！", "Wow! You feel %s!"), desc_stat_pos[stat]);
 
                return TRUE;
        }
@@ -3513,7 +3512,7 @@ bool do_inc_stat(player_type *creature_ptr, int stat)
        /* Restoration worked */
        if (res)
        {
-               msg_format(_("元通りに%sなった気がする。", "You feel more %s."), desc_stat_pos[stat]);
+               msg_format(_("元通りに%sなった気がする。", "You feel %s."), desc_stat_pos[stat]);
 
                return TRUE;
        }