From: Eric Branlund <ebranlund@fastmail.com>
Date: Mon, 1 Mar 2021 01:35:09 +0000 (-0800)
Subject: Rephrase the English description for Miraak to be a bit more fluent.
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Rephrase the English description for Miraak to be a bit more fluent.
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diff --git a/lib/edit/r_info.txt b/lib/edit/r_info.txt
index 626a8a7b4..55766a786 100644
--- a/lib/edit/r_info.txt
+++ b/lib/edit/r_info.txt
@@ -24174,9 +24174,9 @@ F:NO_SLEEP | NO_CONF | BASH_DOOR | KILL_BODY | PASS_WALL
 F:ONLY_ITEM | DROP_3D2 | DROP_4D2 | DROP_GREAT
 S:1_IN_3 | TELE_TO | TPORT | HEAL | S_KIN | BA_ELEC | BA_FIRE | BA_COLD
 S:BR_SOUN | BR_DISI
-D:$This man can completely absorb the soul of dragons
-D:$ without giving him time to save the power to revive in Mordor nor Oblivion.
-D:$  Will there ever be a dragon who can not hang its head to him?
+D:$This man can completely absorb the soul of a dragon
+D:$ without giving it the chance to revive in Mordor or Oblivion.
+D:$  Will there ever be a dragon who does not hang its head to him?
 D:この男は、冥界で復活する力を蓄える時間すら与えず
 D:ドラゴンの魂を完全に吸収することができる。
 D:彼の前で頭を垂れないドラゴンが果たしてこの世にいるだろうか？