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Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:40:35 +0000 (14:40 -0700)]
Reworded English description of light bolt/beam mirror spell.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:39:11 +0000 (14:39 -0700)]
Dropped "and more and more" in English description for detection ability since it wasn't clear what it implied. Added a definite article to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:37:41 +0000 (14:37 -0700)]
Reworded the English description of the invulnerability piercing ability to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:36:05 +0000 (14:36 -0700)]
To be more idiomatic, reworded the English description of the duration of the time stop ability.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:33:47 +0000 (14:33 -0700)]
Changed the English description of the damage to SP ability to be clearer.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:31:11 +0000 (14:31 -0700)]
Reworded English description of PSI damage ball ability to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:28:35 +0000 (14:28 -0700)]
Reworded the English description of the stone skin and resistances ability to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:26:29 +0000 (14:26 -0700)]
Reworded the English description of the attack and then move to other side ability to use "dodge" since that reads better though it may not convey what the ability really does.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:23:16 +0000 (14:23 -0700)]
Reworded the description for "Crack" to hopefully be more idiomatic and still convey that the effect is a beam and not a bolt.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:20:25 +0000 (14:20 -0700)]
To be more idiomatic, added an indefinite article to the English description for "Midare-Setsugekka".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:19:37 +0000 (14:19 -0700)]
Replaced "counter blow" with "counterattack" in English spell description.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:18:41 +0000 (14:18 -0700)]
To be more idiomatic, added definite article to English description of "Detect Ferocity".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:16:42 +0000 (14:16 -0700)]
Combined the two sentences in the English description for the death realm's identify spell.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:12:57 +0000 (14:12 -0700)]
Changed the spell name "Esoteria" (was it supposed to be "Esoterica") to Google Translate's result for the Japanese name, "Secrets of the Dead" , since that's more evocative.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:08:51 +0000 (14:08 -0700)]
In the English description for "Keiun-Kininken" replaced "a" with "an" since what follows starts with a vowel and replaced "damages" with "damage" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:07:14 +0000 (14:07 -0700)]
To be more idiomatic, reordered adjectives in the English description for "Mosou-Sandan".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:06:07 +0000 (14:06 -0700)]
Combined the sentences in the English description for "Desparate Attack". Replaced "damages" with "damage" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:05:00 +0000 (14:05 -0700)]
Combined the sentences in the English description of "Majingiri" and added an indefinite article.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:03:48 +0000 (14:03 -0700)]
Reworded English description of "Judge" to be more idiomatic and drop and unnecessary conjunction.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:02:36 +0000 (14:02 -0700)]
Since the two verbs in the English description for "Wind Blast" use the same subject, dropped the unnecessary comma.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 21:01:33 +0000 (14:01 -0700)]
In English description of "Boomerang", kept the separate sentences and dropped the unnecesary conjunction.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:59:54 +0000 (13:59 -0700)]
For better grammar, changed English message to use a participle.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:58:07 +0000 (13:58 -0700)]
To be more idiomatic, replace "at a time" with "at the same time".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:55:52 +0000 (13:55 -0700)]
Changed preposition in English description of "3-Way Attack" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:52:22 +0000 (13:52 -0700)]
For the English messages to "Harakiri", changed to uniformly use "bushido", added an English gloss for that Japanee term, and removed a definite article to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:50:33 +0000 (13:50 -0700)]
Reworded English description of "Hundred Slaughter" to be clearer about the conditions for continuing the series of attacks.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:48:48 +0000 (13:48 -0700)]
Changed third sentence of the English description for "Bloody Maelstrom" to be a complete clause. Chnage a preposition there to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:47:18 +0000 (13:47 -0700)]
Changed second sentence of the English description for "Vampire's Fang" to a complete clause.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:46:00 +0000 (13:46 -0700)]
To be more idiomatic, dropped "out" in the English message for the onset of "War cry".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:43:13 +0000 (13:43 -0700)]
Reworded second sentence in English description of "Spot Aiming" to change verb tense and better set off the introductory clause.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:41:37 +0000 (13:41 -0700)]
Combined sentences in English description of "Rock Smash". Changed preposition to make the description more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:40:16 +0000 (13:40 -0700)]
Changed second sentence for the English description of "Zammaken" to be a complete phrase.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:38:18 +0000 (13:38 -0700)]
Reworded English description for "Strike to Stun" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:35:44 +0000 (13:35 -0700)]
Reworded English description for "Tobi-Izuna" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:03:45 +0000 (13:03 -0700)]
In English messages, replaced "spelling" with "casting" when refering to the ongoing process of using a spell.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 20:01:27 +0000 (13:01 -0700)]
Changed English name for hex spell to be "Pain to mana" since using the plural didn't add anything.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:59:50 +0000 (12:59 -0700)]
Changed English name of hex spell to "Armor of ice" ("Icy armor" would be another alternative).
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:58:15 +0000 (12:58 -0700)]
To be more idiomatic, reworded English message for onset of the "Eye for an eye" spell.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:56:32 +0000 (12:56 -0700)]
Removed the comma in the description of "Pains to mana" since the two verbs use the same subject.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:54:53 +0000 (12:54 -0700)]
Made "spell" plural in English description for "Anti magic barrier".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:53:33 +0000 (12:53 -0700)]
Reworded English message for start of "Animate dead" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:52:21 +0000 (12:52 -0700)]
Moved "more" in English message since it is clearer when it is before the verb.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:50:55 +0000 (12:50 -0700)]
To be more idiomatic, reworded English description of "Hypodynamic mist".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:49:59 +0000 (12:49 -0700)]
Simplified English message after casting "Extra might".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:48:28 +0000 (12:48 -0700)]
Simplified the English description for "Inhale potion".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:47:02 +0000 (12:47 -0700)]
Replaced "attend" with "sense" in English message since the latter seems more appropriate.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:45:03 +0000 (12:45 -0700)]
For the English messages about the remove curse for mana spell, got rid of "away" since "vanish" is enough and added an indefinite article.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:42:51 +0000 (12:42 -0700)]
To be more idiomatic, reworded English messages related to the "Revenge sentence" spell.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:39:00 +0000 (12:39 -0700)]
For the English messages about the hex realm healing spells, "better and better" doesn't convey much. Changed to simply use "better", and for the light and critical cases, to add a qualifier to that.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:37:30 +0000 (12:37 -0700)]
To be more idiomatic, reworded English message about no armor for "Curse armor".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:32:56 +0000 (12:32 -0700)]
Changed English message about missing weapon for "Curse weapon" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:31:45 +0000 (12:31 -0700)]
Reworded English message for a missing cloak for "Cloak of Shadow" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:29:01 +0000 (12:29 -0700)]
Reworded the English messages which used "brightness disappeared" for a spell lapsing to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:26:49 +0000 (12:26 -0700)]
Reworded English messages related to the "Patience" hex spell to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:23:52 +0000 (12:23 -0700)]
Reworded English description of "Stinking mist" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:49:32 +0000 (10:49 -0700)]
Changed "these" to "them" in English description of "Firiel's Song" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:47:19 +0000 (10:47 -0700)]
Reworded English description of the clairaudience song for the part about how the effects don't all happen instantaneously.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:45:29 +0000 (10:45 -0700)]
Modified English description of "Protect from Corrosion" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:42:36 +0000 (10:42 -0700)]
Changed "stair" to "staircase" in English description (could replace "a stair" with "stairs" but then also have to adjust the verb conjugation).
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:41:35 +0000 (10:41 -0700)]
Dropped unnecessary preposition in English description for "Ray of Sunlight".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:39:22 +0000 (10:39 -0700)]
Reworded the English description of "Vampiric Bolt" for clarity.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:37:47 +0000 (10:37 -0700)]
For English description of "Genocide One" prefer "eradicate" to "vanish" since the latter implies that the creature is merely hidden rather than destroyed.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:36:08 +0000 (10:36 -0700)]
Reworded the English description of "Wraithform" for clarity.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:33:07 +0000 (10:33 -0700)]
Reworded the English descriptions for how abilities change with the polymorph self spells in the death and daemon realms.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:29:17 +0000 (10:29 -0700)]
For English description of "Bloody Curse", put commas around a subordinate clause for clarity.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:27:23 +0000 (10:27 -0700)]
Reworded the corpse sacrifice part of the English description for "Summon Greater Demon".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:26:21 +0000 (10:26 -0700)]
Reworded English description for the "Doom Hand" spell.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:23:51 +0000 (10:23 -0700)]
For clarity, split or combined clauses in the English description for the "Crusade spell".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:21:22 +0000 (10:21 -0700)]
Reworded "Mana branding" English description for clarity.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:57:05 +0000 (09:57 -0700)]
Changed English descriptions for globe of invulnerability spell to add an indefinite article and replace "damages" with "damage".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:54:09 +0000 (09:54 -0700)]
For English description of town teleport spell, changed "in a moment" to "instantly".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:52:31 +0000 (09:52 -0700)]
In English spell descriptions added an indefinite article for "bonus".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:41:27 +0000 (09:41 -0700)]
For onset of one song, changed English message to match verb tenses.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:38:46 +0000 (09:38 -0700)]
Corrected English irregular past tense in spell description.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:36:21 +0000 (09:36 -0700)]
For English message, made "kind" plural to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:34:42 +0000 (09:34 -0700)]
Changed English spell name for the trump realm hydra summoning spell: use "Reptile" rather "Reptiles" since one creature is summoned.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:32:56 +0000 (09:32 -0700)]
Reworded English descriptions of the meteor swarm spells to change a preposition, replace "makes" with "causes", and replace "meteor balls" with "meteorites".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:27:00 +0000 (09:27 -0700)]
Changed the English spell description for "Call the Void" since the destruction effect happens when the caster is next to a wall.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:22:45 +0000 (09:22 -0700)]
Reworded the English descriptions of the teleport level spells: don't mention stairs and change "in a moment" to "instantly".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:11:19 +0000 (09:11 -0700)]
Changed another English spell description involving sleep.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 16:08:03 +0000 (09:08 -0700)]
Since sleep isn't used as a transitive verb, changed the English spell descriptions to use expressions like "put to sleep".
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 10:43:00 +0000 (03:43 -0700)]
Changed instance of "to which from" to "to that from" for resistance due to a mind spell.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 10:32:51 +0000 (03:32 -0700)]
For the English descriptions of spells adding temporary resistances, replaced "to which from" with "to that from" (for a single resistance) or "to those from" (for multiple resistances) since those seem less awkward.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 07:00:07 +0000 (00:00 -0700)]
Corrected spelling mistakes in English mind spell descriptions.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 06:56:47 +0000 (23:56 -0700)]
Corrected spelling mistake in English spell description and removed unnecessary "which" in the same description.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 06:51:32 +0000 (23:51 -0700)]
In the English spell descriptions, made corrections for subject/verb agreement in subordinate clauses and secondary sentences.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 06:46:51 +0000 (23:46 -0700)]
Changed another spell description to use a third person singular verb.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 06:23:57 +0000 (23:23 -0700)]
CHanged another place in a spell description for third person singular (changed the base verb as well to hopefully be more idiomatic).
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 06:17:26 +0000 (23:17 -0700)]
Changed one more place in spell descriptions to use a third person singular verb.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 06:11:14 +0000 (23:11 -0700)]
Most of the English spell descriptions use a third person singular verb with an implicit subject like "this ability" or "this spell". Changed the ones that didn't use the third person singular to use it.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 05:16:48 +0000 (22:16 -0700)]
Changed the English message for lapsing of alter reality to hopefully be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 05:12:33 +0000 (22:12 -0700)]
Changed an English message related to "Call the Void" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 05:10:22 +0000 (22:10 -0700)]
Reworded English message about absence of a mirror to hopefully be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 05:08:34 +0000 (22:08 -0700)]
Corrected subject/verb agreement in English message for darkness cancelling a light area spell.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 05:06:55 +0000 (22:06 -0700)]
Corrected English spelling mistake in description for probing spell.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 05:02:20 +0000 (22:02 -0700)]
For English description of "Fingolfin's Challenge", removed the part about costing extra turns since the Japanese description doesn't have it and it's not something that appears in the code (though it does for the other globe of invulnerability spells). Slightly reworded the first sentence to hopefully be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 04:57:33 +0000 (21:57 -0700)]
Changed English message for constitution loss due to disease to hopefully be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 04:53:14 +0000 (21:53 -0700)]
Changed English message for time-caused experience loss to hopefully be more idiomatic and expressive.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 04:08:46 +0000 (21:08 -0700)]
Reworded English message about pets affecting concentration to hopefully be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 26 Sep 2019 04:05:55 +0000 (21:05 -0700)]
For English message about making ammo, added an indefinite article for clarity.