From 32c5ce884d863ce5e66dd597c5bd2c50d8b9fffb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Eric Branlund <ebranlund@fastmail.com>
Date: Thu, 26 Sep 2019 10:33:07 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Reworded the English descriptions for how abilities change
 with the polymorph self spells in the death and daemon realms.

---
 src/realm-daemon.c | 4 ++--
 src/realm-death.c  | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/realm-daemon.c b/src/realm-daemon.c
index 39cab48c4..4aeaf626a 100644
--- a/src/realm-daemon.c
+++ b/src/realm-daemon.c
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ concptr do_daemon_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 	case 20:
 		if (name) return _("悪魔変化", "Polymorph Demon");
 		if (desc) return _("一定時間、悪魔に変化する。変化している間は本来の種族の能力を失い、代わりに悪魔としての能力を得る。",
-			"Causes you to mimic a demon for a while. Loses abilities of original race and gets abilities as a demon.");
+			"Causes you to mimic a demon for a while. You lose the abilities of your original race and get the abilities of a demon for that time.");
 
 		{
 			int base = 10 + plev / 2;
@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ concptr do_daemon_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 	case 31:
 		if (name) return _("魔王変化", "Polymorph Demonlord");
 		if (desc) return _("悪魔の王に変化する。変化している間は本来の種族の能力を失い、代わりに悪魔の王としての能力を得、壁を破壊しながら歩く。",
-			"Causes you to mimic a demon lord for a while. Loses abilities of original race and gets great abilities as a demon lord. Even hard walls can't stop your walking.");
+			"Causes you to mimic a demon lord for a while. You lose the abilities of your original race and get the great abilities of a demon lord for that time. Even hard walls can't stop your walking.");
 
 		{
 			int base = 15;
diff --git a/src/realm-death.c b/src/realm-death.c
index 35b6a3dd0..41feb15a7 100644
--- a/src/realm-death.c
+++ b/src/realm-death.c
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ concptr do_death_spell(SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 	case 27:
 		if (name) return _("吸血鬼変化", "Polymorph Vampire");
 		if (desc) return _("一定時間、吸血鬼に変化する。変化している間は本来の種族の能力を失い、代わりに吸血鬼としての能力を得る。",
-			"Causes you to mimic a vampire for a while. Loses abilities of original race and gets abilities as a vampire.");
+			"Causes you to mimic a vampire for a while. You lose the abilities of your original race and get the abilities of a vampire for that time.");
 
 		{
 			int base = 10 + plev / 2;
-- 
2.11.0