From c0b6a4bae6b2488a0278aaf85dad8a4b4dfb9604 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Eric Branlund <ebranlund@fastmail.com>
Date: Sun, 29 Mar 2020 23:17:26 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Reworded the second sentence in the English descriptions for
 the water, earth, and Rajoumon ogres to be a bit briefer and clearer.

---
 lib/edit/r_info.txt | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/lib/edit/r_info.txt b/lib/edit/r_info.txt
index 08aadacd5..49f104f6f 100644
--- a/lib/edit/r_info.txt
+++ b/lib/edit/r_info.txt
@@ -22812,7 +22812,7 @@ S:1_IN_6
 S:SCARE | BLIND | CONF | HOLD
 S:BR_WALL | BA_NETH | BR_PLAS | S_DEMON
 D:$This ogre has earthy colored skin.
-D:$  It doesn't only punish sinners but also leads lower-class ogres.
+D:$  Besides punishing sinners, it also leads lower-class ogres.
 D:土気色の肌をした鬼だ。
 D:それは罪人を処罰すると同時に、下級の鬼達を統率している。
 
@@ -22831,7 +22831,7 @@ S:1_IN_6
 S:SCARE | BLIND | CONF | HOLD
 S:BO_WATE | BA_WATE | BA_NETH | S_DEMON
 D:$This ogre has stagnant river colored skin.
-D:$  It doesn't only punish sinners but also leads lower-class ogres.
+D:$  Besides punishing sinners, it also leads lower-class ogres.
 D:淀んだ川の色の肌をした鬼だ。
 D:それは罪人を処罰すると同時に、下級の鬼達を統率している。
 
@@ -22851,7 +22851,7 @@ S:1_IN_5
 S:SCARE | BLIND | CONF | HOLD
 S:BA_NUKE | BA_NETH | BR_GRAV | S_DEMON
 D:$It lives in Rajoumon.
-D:$  It doesn't only punish sinners but also leads lower-class ogres.
+D:$  Besides punishing sinners, it also leads lower-class ogres.
 D:羅生門に巣食う鬼だ。
 D:それは罪人を処罰すると同時に、下級の鬼達を統率している。
 
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