From e5542963a36ab8432dd9f0e752b556ce62643658 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Eric Branlund <ebranlund@fastmail.com>
Date: Thu, 26 Sep 2019 15:38:33 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 1/1] In English spell descriptions, use "cuts" rather than
 "cut status" or "cut", "poisons" rather than "poison status" or "poison", and
 "being stunned" rather then "stun" (as a noun).

---
 src/mind.c           |  2 +-
 src/realm-arcane.c   |  4 ++--
 src/realm-craft.c    |  2 +-
 src/realm-crusade.c  |  4 ++--
 src/realm-hex.c      |  6 +++---
 src/realm-hissatsu.c |  2 +-
 src/realm-life.c     | 12 ++++++------
 src/realm-nature.c   |  4 ++--
 src/realm-song.c     |  2 +-
 9 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/mind.c b/src/mind.c
index 665c7236a..5fcff8f5b 100644
--- a/src/mind.c
+++ b/src/mind.c
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ static concptr const mind_tips[5][MAX_MIND_POWERS] =
 	"Gives stone skin and some resistance to elements for a while. As your level increases, more resistances are given.",
 	"Gives feeling of an item. Or identifies an item at level 25.",
 	"Generates a ball centered on you which inflicts PSI damage on a monster or, at level 25 and higher, inflicts PSI damage on all monsters.",
-	"Removes fear and stun. Gives heroism and speed. Heals HP a little unless you already have heroism and a temporary speed boost.",
+	"Removes fear and being stunned. Gives heroism and speed. Heals HP a little unless you already have heroism and a temporary speed boost.",
 	"Pulls a distant item close to you.",
 	"Fires a ball which damages. When not resisted, you gain SP. You will be occupied for 0 to 1.5 turns after casting as your mind recovers.",
 	"Fires a beam of pure energy which penetrates invulnerability barriers.",
diff --git a/src/realm-arcane.c b/src/realm-arcane.c
index b2146fa09..cbbdf9151 100644
--- a/src/realm-arcane.c
+++ b/src/realm-arcane.c
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ concptr do_arcane_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode
 
 	case 7:
 		if (name) return _("軽傷の治癒", "Cure Light Wounds");
-		if (desc) return _("怪我と体力を少し回復させる。", "Heals cut and HP a little.");
+		if (desc) return _("怪我と体力を少し回復させる。", "Heals cuts and HP a little.");
 
 		{
 			DICE_NUMBER dice = 2;
@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ concptr do_arcane_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode
 
 	case 18:
 		if (name) return _("重傷の治癒", "Cure Medium Wounds");
-		if (desc) return _("怪我と体力を中程度回復させる。", "Heals cut and HP more.");
+		if (desc) return _("怪我と体力を中程度回復させる。", "Heals cuts and HP.");
 
 		{
 			DICE_NUMBER dice = 4;
diff --git a/src/realm-craft.c b/src/realm-craft.c
index 367bff17d..58e47e2eb 100644
--- a/src/realm-craft.c
+++ b/src/realm-craft.c
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ concptr do_craft_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
 	case 14:
 		if (name) return _("癒し", "Cure");
-		if (desc) return _("毒、朦朧状態、負傷を全快させ、幻覚を直す。", "Heals poison, stun, cut and hallucination completely.");
+		if (desc) return _("毒、朦朧状態、負傷を全快させ、幻覚を直す。", "Completely heals poisons, cuts, hallucination and being stunned.");
 
 		{
 			if (cast)
diff --git a/src/realm-crusade.c b/src/realm-crusade.c
index 8b4321857..1cc9d7414 100644
--- a/src/realm-crusade.c
+++ b/src/realm-crusade.c
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ concptr do_crusade_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mod
 
 	case 7:
 		if (name) return _("身体浄化", "Purify");
-		if (desc) return _("傷、毒、朦朧から全快する。", "Heals all cut, stun and poison status.");
+		if (desc) return _("傷、毒、朦朧から全快する。", "Heals all cuts, poisons and being stunned.");
 		{
 			if (cast)
 			{
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ concptr do_crusade_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mod
 	case 15:
 		if (name) return _("聖なる御言葉", "Holy Word");
 		if (desc) return _("視界内の邪悪な存在に大きなダメージを与え、体力を回復し、毒、恐怖、朦朧状態、負傷から全快する。",
-			"Damages all evil monsters in sight, heals HP somewhat, and completely heals poison, fear, stun and cut status.");
+			"Damages all evil monsters in sight, heals HP somewhat, and completely cures fear, poisons, cuts, and being stunned.");
 
 		{
 			int dam_sides = plev * 6;
diff --git a/src/realm-hex.c b/src/realm-hex.c
index 3ca492a70..70f2e4cbe 100644
--- a/src/realm-hex.c
+++ b/src/realm-hex.c
@@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ concptr do_hex_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
 	case 1:
 		if (name) return _("軽傷の治癒", "Cure light wounds");
-		if (desc) return _("HPや傷を少し回復させる。", "Heals cut and HP a little.");
+		if (desc) return _("HPや傷を少し回復させる。", "Heals cuts and HP a little.");
 		if (info) return info_heal(1, 10, 0);
 		if (cast)
 		{
@@ -573,7 +573,7 @@ concptr do_hex_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
 	case 9:
 		if (name) return _("重傷の治癒", "Cure serious wounds");
-		if (desc) return _("体力や傷を多少回復させる。", "Heals cut and HP more.");
+		if (desc) return _("体力や傷を多少回復させる。", "Heals cuts and HP.");
 		if (info) return info_heal(2, 10, 0);
 		if (cast)
 		{
@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@ concptr do_hex_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
 	case 17:
 		if (name) return _("致命傷の治癒", "Cure critical wounds");
-		if (desc) return _("体力や傷を回復させる。", "Heals cut and HP greatry.");
+		if (desc) return _("体力や傷を回復させる。", "Heals cuts and HP greatly.");
 		if (info) return info_heal(4, 10, 0);
 		if (cast)
 		{
diff --git a/src/realm-hissatsu.c b/src/realm-hissatsu.c
index 549442dff..4a6a486a8 100644
--- a/src/realm-hissatsu.c
+++ b/src/realm-hissatsu.c
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ concptr do_hissatsu_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mo
 	case 19:
 		if (name) return _("赤流渦", "Bloody Maelstrom");
 		if (desc) return _("自分自身も傷を作りつつ、その傷が深いほど大きい威力で全方向の敵を攻撃できる。生きていないモンスターには効果がない。",
-			"Attacks all adjacent monsters with power corresponding to your cut status. Then increases your cut status. Has no effect on unliving monsters.");
+			"Attacks all adjacent monsters with power corresponding to your cuts. Then increases your cuts. Has no effect on unliving monsters.");
 
 		if (cast)
 		{
diff --git a/src/realm-life.c b/src/realm-life.c
index bcbed577d..7c3c070d5 100644
--- a/src/realm-life.c
+++ b/src/realm-life.c
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ concptr do_life_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 	{
 	case 0:
 		if (name) return _("軽傷の治癒", "Cure Light Wounds");
-		if (desc) return _("怪我と体力を少し回復させる。", "Heals cut and HP a little.");
+		if (desc) return _("怪我と体力を少し回復させる。", "Heals cuts and HP a little.");
 		{
 			DICE_NUMBER dice = 2;
 			DICE_SID sides = 10;
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ concptr do_life_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
 	case 5:
 		if (name) return _("重傷の治癒", "Cure Medium Wounds");
-		if (desc) return _("怪我と体力を中程度回復させる。", "Heals cut and HP more.");
+		if (desc) return _("怪我と体力を中程度回復させる。", "Heals cuts and HP more.");
 		{
 			DICE_NUMBER dice = 4;
 			DICE_SID sides = 10;
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ concptr do_life_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
 	case 6:
 		if (name) return _("解毒", "Cure Poison");
-		if (desc) return _("体内の毒を取り除く。", "Cures poison status.");
+		if (desc) return _("体内の毒を取り除く。", "Cures yourself of any poisons.");
 		{
 			if (cast)
 			{
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ concptr do_life_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
 	case 10:
 		if (name) return _("致命傷の治癒", "Cure Critical Wounds");
-		if (desc) return _("体力を大幅に回復させ、負傷と朦朧状態も全快する。", "Heals cut, stun and HP greatly.");
+		if (desc) return _("体力を大幅に回復させ、負傷と朦朧状態も全快する。", "Heals HP greatly. Also cures cuts and being stunned.");
 		{
 			DICE_NUMBER dice = 8;
 			DICE_SID sides = 10;
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ concptr do_life_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
 	case 14:
 		if (name) return _("体力回復", "Healing");
-		if (desc) return _("極めて強力な回復呪文で、負傷と朦朧状態も全快する。", "Much powerful healing magic, and heals cut and stun completely.");
+		if (desc) return _("極めて強力な回復呪文で、負傷と朦朧状態も全快する。", "Is very powerful healing magic. Also completely cures cuts and being stunned.");
 
 		{
 			int heal = 300;
@@ -439,7 +439,7 @@ concptr do_life_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
 	case 29:
 		if (name) return _("*体力回復*", "Healing True");
-		if (desc) return _("最強の治癒の魔法で、負傷と朦朧状態も全快する。", "The greatest healing magic. Heals all HP, cut and stun.");
+		if (desc) return _("最強の治癒の魔法で、負傷と朦朧状態も全快する。", "Is the greatest healing magic. Heals all HP, cuts and being stunned.");
 
 		{
 			int heal = 2000;
diff --git a/src/realm-nature.c b/src/realm-nature.c
index 3dc8d7dea..246023585 100644
--- a/src/realm-nature.c
+++ b/src/realm-nature.c
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ concptr do_nature_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode
 
 	case 7:
 		if (name) return _("傷と毒治療", "Cure Wounds & Poison");
-		if (desc) return _("怪我を全快させ、毒を体から完全に取り除き、体力を少し回復させる。", "Heals all cut and poison status. Heals HP a little.");
+		if (desc) return _("怪我を全快させ、毒を体から完全に取り除き、体力を少し回復させる。", "Heals all cuts and poisons. Heals HP a little.");
 
 		{
 			DICE_NUMBER dice = 2;
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ concptr do_nature_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode
 
 	case 15:
 		if (name) return _("薬草治療", "Herbal Healing");
-		if (desc) return _("体力を大幅に回復させ、負傷、朦朧状態、毒から全快する。", "Heals HP greatly. And heals cut, stun and poison completely.");
+		if (desc) return _("体力を大幅に回復させ、負傷、朦朧状態、毒から全快する。", "Heals HP greatly. Completely cures cuts, poisons and being stunned.");
 		{
 			int heal = 500;
 			if (info) return info_heal(0, 0, heal);
diff --git a/src/realm-song.c b/src/realm-song.c
index da76c0029..50bfd8cdc 100644
--- a/src/realm-song.c
+++ b/src/realm-song.c
@@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ concptr do_music_spell(player_type *caster_ptr, SPELL_IDX spell, BIT_FLAGS mode)
 
 	case 28:
 		if (name) return _("ヤヴァンナの助け", "Relief of Yavanna");
-		if (desc) return _("強力な回復の歌で、負傷と朦朧状態も全快する。", "Powerful healing song. Also heals cut and stun completely.");
+		if (desc) return _("強力な回復の歌で、負傷と朦朧状態も全快する。", "Powerful healing song. Also completely heals cuts and being stunned.");
 
 		/* Stop singing before start another */
 		if (cast || fail) stop_singing(caster_ptr);
-- 
2.11.0