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Eric Branlund [Wed, 18 Dec 2019 00:56:54 +0000 (16:56 -0800)]
In English description for "Vampire's Fang" change "to" to "on" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 21:36:30 +0000 (13:36 -0800)]
Inserted missing space after a comma in the English description for "Summon Greater Demon".
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 21:27:38 +0000 (13:27 -0800)]
For English spell descriptions, most only use one space after a period. Changed the handful of instances where two spaces were used.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 20:36:52 +0000 (12:36 -0800)]
Changed English description for "Elemental Branding" to use a more specific verb.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 20:33:22 +0000 (12:33 -0800)]
Reworded the English description for glyph of warding spells to make the conditional part an introductory phrase and to drop the comma before the conjunction.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 20:28:32 +0000 (12:28 -0800)]
Changed one "which" to "that" in the English description of "Holy Aura" so the result is hopefully easier to read.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 20:25:42 +0000 (12:25 -0800)]
In English description, changed last verb to past tense since the player was damaged at the point that the monster takes damage.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 20:20:55 +0000 (12:20 -0800)]
Reworded English descriptions of heroism-like spells to make it clear that the HP boost isn't a timed effect.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 19:55:53 +0000 (11:55 -0800)]
Reworded English description of clairvoyance: previous version was missing possessive in second sentence and had unnecessary "and".
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 19:52:31 +0000 (11:52 -0800)]
Removed comma from English descriptions of recall spells or abilities: only two phrases are joined by the conjuction and they are not independent.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 19:36:41 +0000 (11:36 -0800)]
In English description for "Holy Orb" removed comma before conjuction since there's only two things joined.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 17:45:23 +0000 (09:45 -0800)]
Replaced "effect" (used as a verb) with "affect" in two English spell descriptions where "affect" is the right word to use.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 17:43:02 +0000 (09:43 -0800)]
Added preposition in English decription for globe of invulnerability spell.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 05:12:59 +0000 (21:12 -0800)]
Added a "the" in the English description of the berserker detection spell in order to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 05:11:38 +0000 (21:11 -0800)]
Made the magic mapping part a complete sentence in the English description for the mirror-master's detection ability.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 05:09:14 +0000 (21:09 -0800)]
Reworded the English description of the mindcrafter's detection ability to be similar to the other detection descriptions that were modified. Dropped the "more and more" since that didn't seem to add anything.
Eric Branlund [Tue, 17 Dec 2019 00:40:23 +0000 (16:40 -0800)]
Reworeded third sentence in description of time stop ability to be a full sentence.
Eric Branlund [Mon, 16 Dec 2019 23:58:48 +0000 (15:58 -0800)]
Added preposition to English description for globe of invulnerability spell.
Eric Branlund [Mon, 16 Dec 2019 18:14:50 +0000 (10:14 -0800)]
Changed verb in English spell description (a change that was lost in the process of earlier updates).
Eric Branlund [Mon, 16 Dec 2019 05:15:52 +0000 (21:15 -0800)]
Changed another instance of "informations" to "information" in an user-facing English message.
Eric Branlund [Mon, 16 Dec 2019 04:06:21 +0000 (20:06 -0800)]
To match what's done in other spell descriptions, removed comma before "and" in a list of effects in a spell description.
Eric Branlund [Mon, 16 Dec 2019 04:02:44 +0000 (20:02 -0800)]
Replaced "damages" (as a noun) with "damage" in English messages for hex spells since the latter works as well or better. In one instance, also changed the preposition immediately after "damages" to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Mon, 16 Dec 2019 03:59:59 +0000 (19:59 -0800)]
Corrected typo introduced in earlier modification of an English message.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 22:23:21 +0000 (14:23 -0800)]
Corrected English spelling mistake for "conversion".
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 22:22:07 +0000 (14:22 -0800)]
Changed another English message about pets affecting concentration. Had missed it in earlier commit.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 20:33:18 +0000 (12:33 -0800)]
SLightly reworded the English messages about deleting old temporary files for clarity and grammar.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 19:10:28 +0000 (11:10 -0800)]
Made changes to whitespace to match what's in the 2.2.2 refactoring branch.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 17:45:08 +0000 (09:45 -0800)]
Corrected typo ("finely" for "finally") in English message. Also moved the adverb to be closser to the verb for clarity.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 09:17:51 +0000 (01:17 -0800)]
Reworded English messages for having one of the draining curses since the previous ones gave little indication about what was effected.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 09:09:32 +0000 (01:09 -0800)]
Reworded English message for curse that causes spells to fail more often.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 09:05:23 +0000 (01:05 -0800)]
Changed "a" to "an" in front of something starting with a vowel.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 09:03:12 +0000 (01:03 -0800)]
For English message, added an article for "albino" since it is a noun.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 09:01:22 +0000 (01:01 -0800)]
For clarity, replaced "are" and a gerund phrase with an active verb in two English descriptions for mutations.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 08:52:39 +0000 (00:52 -0800)]
Shifted phrase in English message to make it clearer that it applies to the subject of the sentence and not the object.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 08:50:31 +0000 (00:50 -0800)]
Shifted the position of an adverb and added an indefinite article to have a clearer English message for the cavalry special ability.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 08:46:40 +0000 (00:46 -0800)]
Replaced "at a time", "in a time", or "in one time" with "simultaneously" or "at the same time" since those are clearer English.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 08:40:55 +0000 (00:40 -0800)]
Corrected subject/verb agreement in English message about priests' special ability.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 08:37:54 +0000 (00:37 -0800)]
Corrected spelling mistake ("prove" instead of "probe") for English message about a ranger's special ability.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 08:32:30 +0000 (00:32 -0800)]
Added "can" to English message for half-troll special ability to match what is done for other special abilities. Added an indefinite article to the English message for the barbarian and half-troll special ability so they are more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 08:29:07 +0000 (00:29 -0800)]
Corrected subject/verb agreement in English message for paladin's special ability.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 06:44:57 +0000 (22:44 -0800)]
Corrected spelling mistake in message about a ninja ability.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 06:43:28 +0000 (22:43 -0800)]
Corrected spelling mistake and subject/verb agreement in message about the distribution of stat values.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 06:41:14 +0000 (22:41 -0800)]
Inserted missing conjunction between two independent clauses for another message related to CHECK_MULTISHADOW().
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 06:37:16 +0000 (22:37 -0800)]
Changed indentation of one line in recent change to match the indentation elsewhere.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 06:31:03 +0000 (22:31 -0800)]
Changed "posture" to "special stance" in English messages to be consistent with earlier changes of "posture" or "form" to "stance".
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 06:08:15 +0000 (22:08 -0800)]
Corrected English spelling mistake for "alignment" in character dumps and display of a characters virtues.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 06:00:24 +0000 (22:00 -0800)]
Replaced another instance of "spelling" in an English message with "casting" when referring to the ongoing process of using a spell.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 05:58:07 +0000 (21:58 -0800)]
For the English message about the onset of the force aura, changed to use an indefinite article like the other aura onset messages now use.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 15 Dec 2019 02:20:22 +0000 (18:20 -0800)]
Made the "recover courage" part of spell_RF6_HEAL more compact since the possessive pronoun is also computed earlier in the function.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 15:51:48 +0000 (07:51 -0800)]
Changed "at the same time" to "at a time" in the English description of music magic since it describes only one action taking place.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 15:26:18 +0000 (07:26 -0800)]
Changed "many" to "some" in the English description of the hex realm since the former could connote simultaneous usage.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 15:25:07 +0000 (07:25 -0800)]
To be more idiomatic, inserted some articles in the English description of changing the second realm of magic.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 15:07:30 +0000 (07:07 -0800)]
Since "many" might imply being able to use the spells simultaneously, changed to "some of the" in the English description of hex magic.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 15:06:04 +0000 (07:06 -0800)]
Added another article to the description of nature magic so the text matches that in lib/help/magic.txt.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 04:29:16 +0000 (20:29 -0800)]
In English description of imps, added noun and removed a comma where two phrases were joined by a conjunction.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 04:27:27 +0000 (20:27 -0800)]
Added space after period for consistency with other places.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 04:26:28 +0000 (20:26 -0800)]
Removed comma from wrong race description. Fixed.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 04:21:57 +0000 (20:21 -0800)]
Removed some other commas where only two expressions were joined by a conjunction.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 03:15:51 +0000 (19:15 -0800)]
Fixed instances where only used the masculine pronoun in an English description of a class or had tried to add pronouns for both genders but blundered and left out a word.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 03:09:30 +0000 (19:09 -0800)]
Removed unneded comma in English description of half-trolls.
Eric Branlund [Fri, 13 Dec 2019 03:05:52 +0000 (19:05 -0800)]
In English description of blue-mages, made a noun singular to match the possesive pronouns on the object.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 12 Dec 2019 22:37:41 +0000 (14:37 -0800)]
Dropped unnecessary comma in English description of beastmasters (conjunction joins two clauses using the same subject).
Eric Branlund [Thu, 12 Dec 2019 21:52:13 +0000 (13:52 -0800)]
Added comma in English description of half-giants to completely set off an auxilliary clause.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 12 Dec 2019 21:40:19 +0000 (13:40 -0800)]
Added space after period in English description of ChargeMan to be consistent with the spacing used elsewhere.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 12 Dec 2019 21:38:38 +0000 (13:38 -0800)]
Dropped "he or she is" in English description of half-trolls: that's shorter and seems about as clear as before.
Eric Branlund [Wed, 4 Dec 2019 05:28:19 +0000 (21:28 -0800)]
In init_saved_floors(), only check for out-of-date save floor files if savefile is not an empty string. That prevents spurious messages old temporary files when "New" is selected in the Mac OS X Cocoa front-end.
Eric Branlund [Wed, 4 Dec 2019 04:36:04 +0000 (20:36 -0800)]
Plugged memory leak in autopick_autoregister().
Eric Branlund [Fri, 29 Nov 2019 00:29:57 +0000 (16:29 -0800)]
Replaced CGContextShowGlyphsWithAdvances (deprecated as of 10.9) with CGContextShowGlyphsAtPositions (available since 10.5).
Eric Branlund [Thu, 28 Nov 2019 18:14:17 +0000 (10:14 -0800)]
Removed unused file global in main-cocoa.m.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 28 Nov 2019 18:11:19 +0000 (10:11 -0800)]
Updated comment for GLYPH_COUNT.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 28 Nov 2019 18:08:57 +0000 (10:08 -0800)]
Since the player feedback for the same style of rendering in a post 4.2.0 Angband nightly build was that text was harder to read and took up too much space, made adjustments for more compact text rendering.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 7 Nov 2019 05:11:40 +0000 (21:11 -0800)]
Adopted correction for division by zero exception in battle_monsters() from upstream's For2.2.2-Refactoring branch.
88459a3 is the commit number for upstream's change.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 31 Oct 2019 16:49:58 +0000 (09:49 -0700)]
In the description of the ranger class, dropped the article in front of stealth to be more idiomatic and change "a good saving throw" to "good saving throws" for better flow with the other listed characteristics.
Eric Branlund [Thu, 31 Oct 2019 16:46:56 +0000 (09:46 -0700)]
Corrected spelling mistake ("recieve" to "receive").
Eric Branlund [Sun, 20 Oct 2019 17:13:00 +0000 (10:13 -0700)]
Changed the multipliers listed for slays and brands to match what's in melee1.c.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 20 Oct 2019 17:12:16 +0000 (10:12 -0700)]
Changed *Slay* Evil multiplier to match what's in melee1.c.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 20 Oct 2019 16:48:11 +0000 (09:48 -0700)]
Replaced "equipments" with "equipment" in explanations.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 20 Oct 2019 16:47:07 +0000 (09:47 -0700)]
Replaced is + gerund with direct active verb in message to be more consise and idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 20 Oct 2019 16:45:25 +0000 (09:45 -0700)]
In descriptions but not keywords, replaced "armors" with "armor".
Eric Branlund [Sun, 20 Oct 2019 16:43:04 +0000 (09:43 -0700)]
Use "such as" rather than "such like" for more idiomatic English.
Eric Branlund [Sun, 20 Oct 2019 16:33:56 +0000 (09:33 -0700)]
Corrected typos in English autopick header.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 05:36:39 +0000 (22:36 -0700)]
Adjusted more places where only the masculine pronoun was used in class descriptions to use both the masculine and feminine forms.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 05:35:45 +0000 (22:35 -0700)]
Added missing verb in English description of beastmasters.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 05:33:43 +0000 (22:33 -0700)]
In English description of the rogue, put a comma before the gerund phrase describing the benefits of stealth and remove the comma within that phrase since only two benefits are mentioned.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 05:31:37 +0000 (22:31 -0700)]
Modified English description of rogue to use "very stealthy" rather than "a high stealth".
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 05:28:37 +0000 (22:28 -0700)]
Corrected English description of priest for subject/verb agreement.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 05:27:17 +0000 (22:27 -0700)]
For more idiomatic English, replaced "the several" with "several".
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 05:22:17 +0000 (22:22 -0700)]
Corrected typo: "breaths" (plural noun) rather than "breathes" (singular verb).
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 04:38:56 +0000 (21:38 -0700)]
Slightly reworded to avoid using "armors".
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 04:16:02 +0000 (21:16 -0700)]
Some English class descriptions used pronouns of both genders and some just used the masculine forms. Modified the ones that used only the masculine forms to use both with some rewording to avoid extra "him or her" or "he or she" expressions.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 04:13:00 +0000 (21:13 -0700)]
Reworded third sentence in the English description of beastmasters to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 02:36:59 +0000 (19:36 -0700)]
For more idiomatic English, replaced "the several" with "several".
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 02:35:48 +0000 (19:35 -0700)]
Captialized "munchkin" to be consistent with the other personalities.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 02:34:23 +0000 (19:34 -0700)]
The English description of the "Nimble" personality wasn't clear; trying this as an alternative.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 02:32:23 +0000 (19:32 -0700)]
For more idiomatic English, added article in priest description.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 02:29:46 +0000 (19:29 -0700)]
Added missing verg for fighting ability with edged weapons in the English description of the priest class.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 02:28:46 +0000 (19:28 -0700)]
Corrected priest description for subject/verb agreement.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 02:24:17 +0000 (19:24 -0700)]
Made "spell" plural in English description of beastmasters.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 02:22:08 +0000 (19:22 -0700)]
Reworded English description of rangers' proficiency with ranged weapons to be more idiomatic.
Eric Branlund [Sat, 19 Oct 2019 02:20:26 +0000 (19:20 -0700)]
Made "weapon" plural for more idiomatic English description for force-trainers.