英語版の日記の文章で、過去形と現在形が混在していたのを過去形に統一。

diff --git a/src/cmd2.c b/src/cmd2.c
index 875d08a..5df3352 100644 (file)
--- a/src/cmd2.c
+++ b/src/cmd2.c
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ void do_cmd_go_up(void)
 #ifdef JP
        if (record_stair) do_cmd_write_nikki(NIKKI_STAIR, 0-up_num, "³¬Ãʤò¾å¤Ã¤¿");
 #else
-       if (record_stair) do_cmd_write_nikki(NIKKI_STAIR, 0-up_num, "go up the stairs to");
+       if (record_stair) do_cmd_write_nikki(NIKKI_STAIR, 0-up_num, "climbed up the stairs to");
 #endif
 
        /* Success */
@@ -302,8 +302,8 @@ void do_cmd_go_down(void)
                        if (fall_trap) do_cmd_write_nikki(NIKKI_STAIR, down_num, "Í¸Í¤ËÍî¤Á¤¿");
                        else do_cmd_write_nikki(NIKKI_STAIR, down_num, "³¬Ãʤò²¼¤ê¤¿");
 #else
-                       if (fall_trap) do_cmd_write_nikki(NIKKI_STAIR, down_num, "fall from trap door");
-                       else do_cmd_write_nikki(NIKKI_STAIR, down_num, "go down the stairs to");
+                       if (fall_trap) do_cmd_write_nikki(NIKKI_STAIR, down_num, "fell through a trap door");
+                       else do_cmd_write_nikki(NIKKI_STAIR, down_num, "climbed down the stairs to");
 #endif
                }
 

diff --git a/src/cmd4.c b/src/cmd4.c
index c209306..043e7b1 100644 (file)
--- a/src/cmd4.c
+++ b/src/cmd4.c
@@ -333,9 +333,8 @@ static void close_auto_dump(void)
 
 
 /*
- *   Take note to the dialy.
+ *   Take note to the diary.
  */
-
 errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 {
        int day, hour, min;
@@ -459,7 +458,7 @@ errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 #ifdef JP
                        fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s %s¤òȯ¸«¤·¤¿¡£\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
 #else
-                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s discover %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
+                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s discovered %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
 #endif
                        break;
                }
@@ -567,13 +566,13 @@ errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 #ifdef JP
                                fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s µ¢´Ô¤ò»È¤Ã¤Æ%s¤Î%d³¬¤Ø²¼¤ê¤¿¡£\n", hour, min, note_level, d_name+d_info[dungeon_type].name, max_dlv[dungeon_type]);
 #else
-                               fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s recall to dungeon level %d of %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, max_dlv[dungeon_type], d_name+d_info[dungeon_type].name);
+                               fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s recalled to dungeon level %d of %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, max_dlv[dungeon_type], d_name+d_info[dungeon_type].name);
 #endif
                        else
 #ifdef JP
                                fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s µ¢´Ô¤ò»È¤Ã¤ÆÃϾå¤Ø¤ÈÌá¤Ã¤¿¡£\n", hour, min, note_level);
 #else
-                               fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s recall from dungeon to surface.\n", hour, min, note_level);
+                               fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s recalled from dungeon to surface.\n", hour, min, note_level);
 #endif
                        break;
                }
@@ -583,7 +582,7 @@ errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 #ifdef JP
                        fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s ¥¯¥¨¥¹¥È¡Ö%s¡×¤Ø¤ÈÆÍÆþ¤·¤¿¡£\n", hour, min, note_level, quest[num].name);
 #else
-                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s enter quest '%s'.\n", hour, min, note_level, quest[num].name);
+                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s entered the quest '%s'.\n", hour, min, note_level, quest[num].name);
 #endif
                        break;
                }
@@ -592,7 +591,7 @@ errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 #ifdef JP
                        fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s ¥ì¥Ù¥ë¡¦¥Æ¥ì¥Ý¡¼¥È¤Çæ½Ð¤·¤¿¡£\n", hour, min, note_level);
 #else
-                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s Get out using teleport level.\n", hour, min, note_level);
+                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s Got out using teleport level.\n", hour, min, note_level);
 #endif
                        break;
                }
@@ -601,7 +600,7 @@ errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 #ifdef JP
                        fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s %s¤ò¹ØÆþ¤·¤¿¡£\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
 #else
-                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s buy %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
+                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s bought %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
 #endif
                        break;
                }
@@ -610,7 +609,7 @@ errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 #ifdef JP
                        fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s %s¤òÇäµÑ¤·¤¿¡£\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
 #else
-                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s sell %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
+                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s sold %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
 #endif
                        break;
                }
@@ -630,14 +629,14 @@ errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 #ifdef JP
                        fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s Æ®µ»¾ì¤Î%d²óÀï(%s)¤Ë¾¡Íø¤·¤¿¡£\n", hour, min, note_level, num, note);
 #else
-                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s win the %d%s fight (%s).\n", hour, min, note_level, num, (num%10==1?"st":num%10==2?"nd":num%10==3?"rd":"th"), note);
+                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s won the %d%s fight (%s).\n", hour, min, note_level, num, (num%10==1?"st":num%10==2?"nd":num%10==3?"rd":"th"), note);
 #endif
                        if (num == MAX_ARENA_MONS)
                        {
 #ifdef JP
                                fprintf(fff, "                 Æ®µ»¾ì¤Î¤¹¤Ù¤Æ¤ÎŨ¤Ë¾¡Íø¤·¡¢¥Á¥ã¥ó¥Ô¥ª¥ó¤È¤Ê¤Ã¤¿¡£\n");
 #else
-                               fprintf(fff, "                 win all fight to become a Chanpion.\n");
+                               fprintf(fff, "                 won all fight to become a Chanpion.\n");
 #endif
                                do_level = FALSE;
                        }
@@ -648,7 +647,7 @@ errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 #ifdef JP
                        fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s %s¤ò¼±Ê̤·¤¿¡£\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
 #else
-                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s identify %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
+                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s identified %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, note);
 #endif
                        break;
                }
@@ -694,7 +693,7 @@ errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 #ifdef JP
                        fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s %s¤Ø¤È¥Ñ¥¿¡¼¥ó¤ÎÎϤǰÜÆ°¤·¤¿¡£\n", hour, min, note_level, to);
 #else
-                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s use Pattern to teleport to %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, to);
+                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s used Pattern to teleport to %s.\n", hour, min, note_level, to);
 #endif
                        break;
                }
@@ -703,7 +702,7 @@ errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 #ifdef JP
                        fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s ¥ì¥Ù¥ë¤¬%d¤Ë¾å¤¬¤Ã¤¿¡£\n", hour, min, note_level, num);
 #else
-                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s reach player level %d.\n", hour, min, note_level, num);
+                       fprintf(fff, " %2d:%02d %20s reached player level %d.\n", hour, min, note_level, num);
 #endif
                        break;
                }
@@ -728,56 +727,56 @@ errr do_cmd_write_nikki(int type, int num, cptr note)
 #ifdef JP
                                        fprintf(fff, "%s¤òι¤Îͧ¤Ë¤¹¤ë¤³¤È¤Ë·è¤á¤¿¡£\n", note);
 #else
-                                       fprintf(fff, "decide to travel together with %s.\n", note);
+                                       fprintf(fff, "decided to travel together with %s.\n", note);
 #endif
                                        break;
                                case 1:
 #ifdef JP
                                        fprintf(fff, "%s¤Î̾Á°¤ò¾Ã¤·¤¿¡£\n", note);
 #else
-                                       fprintf(fff, "unname %s.\n", note);
+                                       fprintf(fff, "unnamed %s.\n", note);
 #endif
                                        break;
                                case 2:
 #ifdef JP
                                        fprintf(fff, "%s¤ò²òÊü¤·¤¿¡£\n", note);
 #else
-                                       fprintf(fff, "dismiss %s.\n", note);
+                                       fprintf(fff, "dismissed %s.\n", note);
 #endif
                                        break;
                                case 3:
 #ifdef JP
                                        fprintf(fff, "%s¤¬»à¤ó¤Ç¤·¤Þ¤Ã¤¿¡£\n", note);
 #else
-                                       fprintf(fff, "%s die.\n", note);
+                                       fprintf(fff, "%s died.\n", note);
 #endif
                                        break;
                                case 4:
 #ifdef JP
                                        fprintf(fff, "%s¤ò¤ª¤¤¤ÆÊ̤ΥޥåפذÜÆ°¤·¤¿¡£\n", note);
 #else
-                                       fprintf(fff, "move to other map leaving %s behind.\n", note);
+                                       fprintf(fff, "moved to another map leaving %s behind.\n", note);
 #endif
                                        break;
                                case 5:
 #ifdef JP
                                        fprintf(fff, "%s¤È¤Ï¤°¤ì¤Æ¤·¤Þ¤Ã¤¿¡£\n", note);
 #else
-                                       fprintf(fff, "lose sight of %s.\n", note);
+                                       fprintf(fff, "lost sight of %s.\n", note);
 #endif
                                        break;
                                case 6:
 #ifdef JP
                                        fprintf(fff, "%s¤¬*Ç˲õ*¤Ë¤è¤Ã¤Æ¾Ã¤¨µî¤Ã¤¿¡£\n", note);
 #else
-                                       fprintf(fff, "%s is made disappeared by *destruction*.\n", note);
+                                       fprintf(fff, "%s was made disappeared by *destruction*.\n", note);
 #endif
                                        break;
                                case 7:
 #ifdef JP
                                        fprintf(fff, "%s¤¬´äÀФ˲¡¤·ÄÙ¤µ¤ì¤¿¡£\n", note);
 #else
-                                       fprintf(fff, "%s is crushed by falling rocks.\n", note);
+                                       fprintf(fff, "%s was crushed by falling rocks.\n", note);
 #endif
                                        break;
                                default: